Jul 8, 2013

Lost Treasure...

She kept him like a child. Found in her lane, injured and bleeding he was on the verge of fainting and even a squeal would not come out of his mouth. She bought him home, washed and served food. She took him to doctor and arranged a make-shift bed for him.
She played with him, loved him, fed him and insisted on sleeping with him. But now he was gone. Her parents insisted that he needed to go to a proper shelter, what she could do, she was only eight. But he was her first treasure, and she lost him.
100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

14 comments:

  1. Awww :( Maybe she can grow up and own a brand new treasure... but true, not all that is lost can be replaced.

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  2. I agree...plus once discouraged it is quite a possibility that she wont love the pets like she once did...

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  3. Nice and Intense...The Love once lost is never found again...

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  4. I should say that I am coming here for the first time and your story is very good..Yet to read more of your posts, but happy to do the Ultimate Blogging Challenge with you...

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    1. Thank Elizabeth...thank you for dropping by and hope you keep coming back...
      good luck for the challenge :)

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  5. she can always cherish the memories ....

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    1. Well its a fiction...but i think there are many such incidences in real life...

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  6. so cute.. we all have had such treasures in childhood and our parents have spoken similar :(

    Richa

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  7. Can feel what the little girl is undergoing.

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  8. Awww....:(

    How how beautifully you have expressed the beauty and innocence of hers with hidden words.

    Here's my attempt: http://mywhitewindow.blogspot.in/2013/07/lost-treasure.html

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