Oct 14, 2013

Berries - Haiku attempt


berries o berries
you grow so beautiful
teach us to be purposeful 


This is my first Haiku attempt. I am not sure if I have understood the rules of a Haiku completely. I'd really like to hear the feedback and your inputs.

10 comments:

  1. Sugandha a lovely attempt :)I don't know the rules exactly, as far as i know some of my friends follow the 5-7-5 syllabus format :)I too did try my first Haiku in the same format for write tribe!

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  2. I don't know the Rules of Haiku but believe me this is very good.. :)
    Way to Go Sugandha.. :)

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    1. Thank you :) You are always encouraging.

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  3. Thanks for the entry Sugandha

    PhenoMenon

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    1. Pleasure is all mine, this one pushed me to write my first.

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